Unexpected Love: Chapter 1

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243 thoughts on “Unexpected Love: Chapter 1

  1. Bath pa kayo itinago nyo na ang feelings nyo sa pamamagitan ng pag aaway. Pero ha ang nag aaway Lalong lumalim ang pag ibig nyo. Kaya pala the more you hate the more you love.

  2. ganun talaga ang pagibig sa umpisa maiinis ka d mo na alam naiinlove ka n pala hayssss love is tthe air

  3. nkkatuwa nman itong dlawa.. kbliktaran sa mommy nya nuong pnhon nito sya ang nghhbol…sa dad nya. hayyy kilig much. I LIKE BOTH THEIR PARENTS ARE ENJOYING WATCHING THEM…esp. ung nkaw n halik n Aljun. nkta pal nla jjejjejjejjejjj

  4. uu nga…da best talaga itong c PANGARAPKO kung cno ka man
    galing ng concept mo!

    keep it up ๐Ÿ™‚

    ung BINILING PAG-IBIG poh publish mo na…aw

  5. @PANGARAPKO sorry for being so makulit….
    nakakabitin kasi ung BINILING PAG-IBIG…pakipost na po ung ibang chapters pati ung ending asap

    thanx in advance ๐Ÿ™‚

  6. @Erby. Your grammar as well is wrong. As long as you can understand it, don’t complain.

    foo: time-out! ^_^

  7. โ€œ Hey what you two laughing about?โ€ ang tanong ng kanyang mommy na nakalapit na rin at nagtatakang nakatingin sa kanilang mga daddy

    โ€œ Are Daughter seems to have a boyfriend na Ayessaโ€ ang nakatawa pa ring sabi ng kanyang daddy”

    ahm, the story was quite good even if im still on the first chapter,
    im just really bothered about the grammars, some of the english conversations there were very wrong.. just like on what i’ve post above….

    foo: i’ve seen them as well. honestly, TOP needs an editor. but currently, we don’t have anyone to help our authors to edit their stories. well, i can try but i’m also occupied in my real-life job. erby, want to help us out? ^^

  8. wow! naman i2 pla ang continuation ng A Night To Rememer..hehehe

    pro ndi n cla ayessa ang bida…

    ung anak n nya…hehehe

    sna may love story c nathan…hehehehehe

    i love continuations…hehehe

    more power!

  9. ah cool asaran sa una tapos mmya sila na

    sana pagnatapos i2ng isunod mo nman yung kwento ng dalawang kapatid pa ni natasha c nathan at natalie

    ang galing tlaga ggawa na rin ako ng story nakaka inspire gumawa ang galing nio

  10. aww..ang kulit nilang dalawa..lalo na si natasha ayaw talagah magpatalo…hmmm…..ang cute ng story ah!! *-)

    …………..next chapter =]……………….

  11. wow ganda nito ha…. wla akong masabi kong din dabest ka talaga alam mo kong papaano mo pakikiligin at masasayahin kami….
    GOOD LUCK SA IYO …….

  12. nakakatawa sina Natasha at Aljon….sayang bitin ung story pero maganda…hind ko nanga napapansin ang oras sa pagbabasa ng mga story ninyo dito…..hehehehe…plz send me a comment when ur done in chapter 2…^_^

    thanks in advance:)

  13. @pangarapko

    Ay husband nyo po ba, siguro istorya ninyo yang dalawa kasi s’ya ‘yong nagbigay ng pamagat eh…! “,)

    pero iyong komento ko ho ay sakin lang po, syempre kayo pa rin ang masusunod kung ano po ang gusto ninyo. “Kayo ang reyna ng inyong sarili at wala ng iba…”

  14. @foobarph
    feel free foo na ayusin ang story ko i have this problem kasi na once nabasa ko na ayaw ko nang basahin ulit kaya hindi ko na napupuna ang mga mali, i know i should read it again para maayos ko yung mali pero hindi ko talaga kaya uliting basahin.

  15. @bench
    im sorry about that bench, hindi kasi ako nag pa-pay attention sa mga tuldok or comma, kung ano kasi ang maisip kong gustong ikabit ay basta ko na lang isinusulat. but ill try to keep that in mind next time…. thank you, by the way inalis ko na yung bheelat.

  16. errr…nahilo ako sa pagbasa. tuloy-tuloy kasi walang period, walang comma. yung ibang sentence sobra naman sa bantas.

    pwede pakialis yung “bheeeellllaaaaaat” hindi mo naman kailangan ilagay pa iyon sa sentence. nakakadistract kasi.

    more on conversation…hmmmm…ok naman ang story. keep it up!

  17. technical comment:
    hmmm, ok yung story but you need to watch out for those minor spelling issues pangarap. and napansin ko lang na masyadong maraming conversations. maybe you can put those conversations into narrative form para imbis na 5-6 paragraphs ang magagamit mo eh makaka-isang paragraphs ka lang na magkapareho din ng essence.

    sige, ako muna mag e edit ng story mo pero grammars at spellings lang ang aayusin ko ha. if you want to change something, feel free to edit it yourself since you have access to edit your own story. ^^

    story comment:
    gusto ko yung iringan nila aljon at natasha. hahaha! parang starstruck lang. ohohoho!

  18. Ganda-ganda naman….Nice keep up the good work parangarapko….
    Una me sa pagbasa……..
    Sna mapost na ung next chapter….

    …………….Gud luck………………….

    ………………Dhe……………

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